I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience. Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like best and why?
1.“Leave me alone!” I shouted at my brother as I slowly woke up. It was so early in the morning I could hardly open my eyes! When I finally got up, I nearly drifted back to sleep again when I sat down.
2. I was sleeping very well when suddenly the annoying sound of the alarm clock woke me up. Pretending to get up I slowly touched the ground an pulled myself up.
3. Did you know that I have to wake up approximately 40 Mondays out of 52 just for school. Also kids NEED about 9 -10 hours of sleep. That probably means kids need to go to school at 7 - 8’ o clock.
This is a record of my learning at Point England School in Auckland, NZ.
I like number 2 and you must being annoy from your brother hahaha
ReplyDeleteI like your 3rd one. Because the facts you wrote are interesting.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kaycee you had the same choice as me xoxo
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