tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1684689221319812175.post4270090157598601006..comments2014-12-02T16:24:33.018+13:00Comments on Kaycee: A Surfing DogPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1684689221319812175.post-871390354470129372013-03-28T09:10:14.043+13:002013-03-28T09:10:14.043+13:00Great Job Kaycee! You really got me hooked in, in ...Great Job Kaycee! You really got me hooked in, in your introduction. Probably my favourite paragraph is the 4th. In that paragraph, you had detail and used interesting words. Through out the whole story, I was able to imagine everything in my head because of your amazing and clear plot! Keep it up!<br /><br />GloriaGloriahttp://pesgloriat.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com